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> The Adventure's of Mutha-Fuckin Heath - Feedback
Diabolic
 Posted: Jan 25 2015, 01:50 AM
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As the title reads, I would lofe to hear some feedback on the story I started. I wasn't aware there was a feedback thread until just now. But if anyone has any ideas/suggestions for possible future chapters, let me know here!

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 Posted: Jan 25 2015, 12:54 PM
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I dont know if you need a seperate thread for feedback but ehh doesnt matter.

Dont have much to say. Funny at some parts. Well written(no obvious errors).

and good thing heath isnt a pedophile

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